Chapter 531 – Spoiler) Review of the Author, Story Behind the Work and Initial Setting, Q&A, Etc.
(From the bottom, there is an author’s review that you don’t need to read, the story behind the work (disclosure of initial settings), and Q&A about the work.)
〈 Author’s review 〉
First of all, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to the readers who have been with me on the long journey of episode 530 until the last episode.
Thanks to all of you, I was able to come this far.
This work (hereinafter referred to as ‘Hypnosis Saint’) is my first work, and if it is not popular, the so-called ‘early termination protocol’ has been prepared, which will end it early around 100 episodes (approximately the Stella rescue part).
It is thanks to your encouragement and love that the series started on May 12, 2021 and became a feature in almost a year!
Thanks to that, I was able to overcome my fear and write all the stories I wanted to write.
Actually, I didn’t know that I would be writing a feature length of 530 episodes as my first work, but…
The characters that come to mind in me come alive and move and expand the story.
As it is my first work, I tried to use it as much as I could without considering commerciality and efficiency.
From the next work, I would like to deal only with medium-length episodes of 50 to 150 episodes.
If it’s too long, it’ll become too much of a saga…
Also, due to the nature of the harem, it was difficult to focus on one main heroine.
(Instead, showing the charms of various heroines is an advantage!)
Hypnosis Saint wrote it with the feeling of ‘I fell in love with many people because I loved it!’
Jeongsil was determined through a vote on platforms Joara and Nobelpia.
Thanks to that, it was difficult for me to write the main heroine until just before Alberic Reid (right before deciding on a match in heaven).
In future works, we plan to choose one heroine and push it honestly.
Well, there may be attractive supporting characters, but I’d like to use them in a way that ensures the importance of the royal family.
However, any writing will have a happy ending at the end, so please look forward to it!
〈 Story behind the work 〉
This work is the author’s first work, and since it was serialized twice a day with only a rough plot, more parts than expected were changed during the serialization.
We reveal the initial settings and changes as follows!
*In the initial setting story, the real heroine was Rumika.
Had it not been for the cronyism vote, the writer would have pushed Lumica.
The trace is the scene where Rumika is the first of her wives to formally marry the main character.
The role of an unfortunate ex-girlfriend who regrets and loses masturbation when the early termination protocol is activated1.
Originally, it was a role to soothe the main character in the beginning, have healing sex, and break up after being hypnotized.
However, the author, who belatedly found out about the web novel system that releases free episodes until the 15th episode, puts off the sex scene and ends up having sex with the last of the five wives.
A heroine who almost couldn’t even appear in a sex scene 1.
However, it is transformed into a role that reveals the paradox of hypnotic pure love.
A heroine who showed that although she liked the real protagonist, her suspicions of hypnosis alone could twist her relationship.
In the work, polygamy + pure love harem with good wives and concubines appear, transforming into a role that manages traffic with non-hypnosis pure love heroine + virgin + demon king’s power and wealth + military force to reinforce the true nature.
Evidence that this role is originally the role of the wife is the heroine in the original story2.
However, in episode 15, the hypnosis is revealed, and a real love fight is revealed, and he loses like a dog in the cronyism vote!
I gave up my royal seat to Saint Mary!
(Appeared in episode 1, breaking the law of Webso that heroines are cheating)
Why are you like that everyone!
Love is basically fighting!
The artist belatedly knows that something is wrong from the title, but it is already too late to turn around.
So frustrated that it didn’t work as intended.
Hastily, the follow-up begins.
The result is the current hypnotic saintess.
As a slender + pelvic beauty, there are many scenes of juniors.
In her initial setting, she tried to take on the role of being eaten periodically, revealing her age-specific appearance due to the waste of magical power.
The story development is rushed, so the scene only appears once in the end.
The age change scene that could not be developed may make a surprise appearance as a cameo in the next work, etc. ?
* In the initial setting, Nene was a MacGuffin, and after the appearance of Bing through Eva, she was not scheduled to appear.
However, the writer appeared in a hurry because he was obsessed with a widowed older woman with big breasts, and she took over before the star princess.
A reverse hypnosis heroine who hypnotizes the protagonist.
The paradox of the hypnotist was revealed, but the story was not expected to appear when the early termination protocol was triggered.
The fact that her nickname, ‘The Phantom Witch’ was built too late, was the result of no special settings.
The writer’s favorite heroine, but the writer’s most roughly conceived.
Her body is quite similar to Marie’s, but the fact that she is firm and chubby with sexy + thick flame + lewd attributes contrasts with Mari’s soft + soft + warm attributes.
Characteristic of her is that she is tall enough to be almost the same height as her direct counterpart, Kamyu.
(She is tall enough to be taller than the main character in heels)
She tries to reveal Master’s attributes, but her reverse hypnosis is discovered and she is immediately trained.
Because of her lack of setup, she was torn between mega dere, her master, and super lewd attributes.
I am personally sorry for the author.
*In the initial setting, the story-centric heroine is, of course, Marianne.
As a hypnotic heroine, the character that most strongly reveals the message delivery in the work.
At this time, the author was surprised by the trap because he wanted to be sorry to see that she was not voted for in the vote of conscientiousness.
Admit it.
Because the busty saintess is always right.
Originally, the concept was to train with a violent first experience and gang rape, but the harsh artist ended up drawing a soft sex scene.
Because of this, her violent training ended up being Angela’s share.
The visual model is ‘Pieta’ and ‘Sword Maiden’ from ‘Goblin Slayer’ and Hitomi.
It is a role that is innocent but lowly, and in order to emphasize the confrontational relationship with the main character, a somewhat firm image (e.G., Wartime nun) was given.
Her hair color is ash gray.
However, since people do not seem to know this color well, from the second half, it was described as silver hair.
I’m afraid that not blonde will only emphasize the color image.
And after the awakening of the goddess of sunshine, her hair shines like the sunlight of a sunset comb, so she sets her hair silver for a contrast effect.
*In the initial setting, Angela was a completely sideline heroine.
There was Marianne as the hypnosis heroine, so I was worried about including it.
However, the writer, who has been watching Jeanne of the Princess Knight of Mouth for the first time in a while, makes a sudden leap.
Add a training scene.
In other web novels, when a saint or a neat and clean character appears, the female knight mainly acts as an escort and is a supporting role.
The writer, who was dissatisfied with this, came up with a full-fledged appearance after thinking about characters such as Fate’s Saber and thinking that it was possible to appeal sufficiently.
The reason why she is blonde is that her husband is usually blonde, so she gave her a blonde attribute to adjust the heroine’s charm balance before the vote.
It is always right that female knights who are right + upright + principled become lewd and depraved.
After training, the part I worked hard on the most was the fight with the gold dragon Nuba Kane, the hypnosis to stop Mari who was angry after being caught, and the part where she got closer to Kamyu again after thinking she was pregnant.
In fact, the heroine that the writer even considered changing to a heroine for the sake of the story.
Personally, I think it’s very attractive.
However, due to lack of power, he was pushed back by Demon King Rumika for his sincerity.
She is also a heroine of misfortune who is deprived of a lot of space due to the overlapping of Agnes described below and the escort position.
*Stella, who was a minor heroine in the initial setting.
However, it was set to be 20 years old in accordance with the harsh reality of Korea.
It is mentioned that the coming-of-age ceremony is held at the age of 15, which is a sign of concern.
The coming-of-age ceremony at the age of 15 and appearing in the work at the age of 20 is a sign of concern over the cover censorship of a certain web prop.
Thanks to that, I drew an embarrassing illustration wearing Valkyrie armor and writing my name with my butt, but it was stopped.
(An illustration of Anne giggling next to him)
In the initial plot, she was locked up in the academy and had sex with her school uniform to escape, but this was changed.
The visual models are Cordelia from The War of Genesis 2 Tempest, Ngi It from The Idol Master, and Magical Girl Costume Girl from My Girlfriend.
When the early termination protocol was activated, she was supposed to be the third and last heroine along with Marie and Angela, but changed.
A pure love heroine position that has nothing to do with hypnosis.
A device that reveals that love has nothing to do with time.
It was set up as a character that reveals a fresh love that makes you quarrel.
In fact, it was mainly set up as a role to be teased by the main character, but her personality changed a little because her age suddenly rose to 20 years old.
In the initial setting, there was a scene in which Stella and her riding a wooden horse on their first date caused her to have incontinence due to the tickle, and to cover it up while riding the wooden horse and drowning in the water, both of them getting wet.
In the form of naturally having the first night while drying clothes.
However, a 20-year-old girl peeing is a bit like that, so I omitted it.
Might have something to deal with later… ?
*In the initial setting, Kamyu was a serious keut.
However, when the readers escaped from the dark atmosphere + continuous sweet potato, the character that entered her at least to make her laugh is the child Mew.
The obvious event is inhaling the smell of panties during the fight with Bellondel, the rescue team for the Princess of the Stars.
The models are Kaires, the main character of the author’s favorite fantasy, ‘The Rogue’, and Huchi of ‘Dragon Raja’.
She likes seriousness + ventilation gags, so she put Jacques and Ludvik in, but as her characters became too many, Kamyu took over her gag role.
Thanks to this, a catastrophe occurred in which a childish emperor was born.
(Is this… The emperor…?)
But surprisingly, the author is satisfied!
Originally prepared extravaganza. She appeared in ‘Hypnotic Emperor’s Conqueror of the Elf Queen’, and after eating and eating her married woman, the Elf Queen, in front of her husband, NTL, her daughter, the Elf Princess, was also scheduled to be trained by raping her mother-daughter rice bowl.
However, the side story was deleted due to the ending stained with pure love and the concern that the character of the main character in the work could drift rapidly.
The scene may be released in another work in the future… ?
During the work, there is a setting that the appearance is normal and the physique is good.
It appears in the descriptions of Nene and Stella, but the really handsome ones are Ran and Van Dark, followed by Michelle.
* Except for Kamyu’s wife O, all the supporting actors with sex scenes are improvised.
Examples are Rebekah, Anne, Agnes, etc.
Thanks to the early termination protocol not being triggered, the work became longer, and the artist decided to write all the characters he could think of in this work.
Example 1) Rebekah
Due to the initial setting, Rebekah was supposed to become airy naturally after Mari appeared.
Country dog + slave attributes.
The sacrifice was decided by a sacrifice vote for the awakening of the main character in Joara.
Several flashbacks appeared with enthusiastic support from readers.
As you know the ending.
If it wasn’t for that, it seems that she naturally broke up somewhere in the cathedral and never appeared again.
From this point, the artist’s experimental spirit begins.
Example 2) Ann
In the initial setting, it was planned to end in a ghastly death by being gulp down by the gold dragon Nuba Kane.
It was a material for the connection and awakening of the main character and Stella, but it survived the battle scene and darkness that led to too long breathing.
Infirmity + Agility + Dignity Princess attribute.
The models are the second sister of the heroine of ‘Familiar Zero’, the younger sister of the main character of Code Geass (I don’t remember the name), Soon-wook, Zhuge Liang, Kwak-ga, etc.
A supporting actor who embarrassed the author by receiving enthusiastic support from readers2.
Example 3) Agnes
Agnes, originally planned to end with death as a villain.
The writer originally hates muscular women, and appears as an enemy to fill the vacancy of Alberic and Philip, who will not die but will soon die.
However, the writer who fell in love with ‘Breaking a strong woman’ suddenly put it in.
Captured by a relentless attack.
Muscle + Powerful attribute.
The model is Dark Souls 3 DLC boss nun Friede, the female assassin from the novel ‘Guunmong’.
The writer wondered why many saints, including the goblin slayer and the sword maiden, were blindfolded.
And there are no assassins! I put it in with a light heart and became immersed.
*Zach and Ludwig were originally scheduled to die before Nuvacane.
In order to send Kamyu in time, it was planned that he would not appear again after the point where the road was blocked… The original body is dark, and I survived to use the Phoenix Storm.
〈 Questions & Answers 〉
Q: What are your plans for your next project?
A: First of all, we are preparing a story about pure love of a sister and a straight line that can be read lightly.
(19 gold works for maintaining writing skills)
After that, I plan to write a fantasy game for all ages, or a spin-off of a hypnotic saint, ‘Sadaham, the blind swordsman’.
After that, Orc Rape and NTL are also available.
(Character centered)
Story, action-oriented soul-type game background fantasy water, or magical girl water is also being planned.
This work focused on the harmony of the story and 19 gold.
However, in the future, if possible, 19 gold will be filled with 19 gold, and story-oriented works will be clearly distinguished by 15 gold with pure love.
As such, the 19th grade would have been able to focus on the bland sex scene, and the 15th grade would have been able to focus on the harmony of the story and the characters.
Oh, my work is characterized by a tightly closed happy ending.
Most likely.
Q: When will Chachagijak featuring Sadaham and Giparang be serialized?
A: I think it will be difficult to show in 22.
Since it’s a long story, it’s going to take a long time to plan, and since Hypnosis Saint was quite a long story, I think it’ll take a long time to prepare a novel with a long storyline.
Instead, we plan to prepare an action movie with an oriental fantasy background, so please look forward to it!
Q: How tall are the characters?
Stella in particular is constantly emphasized as Lori, how small is she?
Answer: The height is Camu 〉 Nene 〉 Mari 〉 Angela 〉 Lumica 〉 Stella in order.
Rumika is about the average height of a girl.
There are detailed settings, but they are deliberately not disclosed.
There are people whose immersion is broken by their height…
The description of the body is planned to be expressed in description rather than numerically as much as possible.
Question: The main character is a demon, but do all human heroines die quickly?
I’m so sad… TT
A: The answer to this will be mentioned in future works.
The Annals are more popular than I thought…
It seems that a brief mention of the current situation or later story will be a surprise for the readers!
In some cases, characters from the main story will appear in cameos or supporting roles in other works.
(Authentic hypnotic saintess universe!)
Q: It’s a harem, but why is it so dark?
Answer: Because it’s a dark fantasy…
I heard that the first works are usually dark, and I think that’s the case.
But it’s a tightly closed happy ending, so it’s okay, right?
I don’t like bad endings and open endings… I can’t even write that well.
Whoops.
Q: Can you post only the annals as a notice?
It’s pretty fun.
Answer: We will post it as a free notice on the future flat-rate platform (Novelpia, Joara)
Q: If you had an ideal type of heroine, what would it be?
Answer: In terms of personality, she was Angela, but these days, yes!
I like honest and upright female knights, and these days, I like Megadere of Infinite Love!
Mari with a sense of volume in her body, Rumika these days!
The chest wave is gradually becoming the hip wave. .
I wonder if you asked this question because you were curious about the heroine’s character in the future.
My younger sister Sunaemul is a sweet and spicy tsundere, soul game background action fantasy is tentatively scheduled to be a sickly neat cool dere!
The hypnotic saint herself released all the heroine characters to be used in the future, and there was also a point where I myself experimented with which characters were attractive when they acted.
You can incorporate it into your future works!
(Example: Agnes, a muscular nun who gets stiff and then breaks)
Q: Will the courtship be determined by voting next time? Dungsil deungsil~
Answer: I plan to write in advance from now on
The slower the decision, the harder it is to set the direction of the work…
Crucially, I’m not good at using the playboy character.
I’ve never done it…
Question: Your eyes… Love me…
Answer: Nene Nunna’s mamma illustration is uploaded to the flat-rate platform notice.
(Posted in the Nobelpia notice section and the free edition of Jo Ara 1)
You can check it out for free, so please stop by when you have time.
Q: Which character do you like the most?
Answer: It is Nene.
Giseungjeontteok is possible! Cheap!
Long live the grateful Yomanmama who buys time while having sex when the storyline gets stuck, and lets you write again when you think of it!
Q: Why isn’t Alberic dying?
A: From next time, we will prepare a lot of villains!
It’s a twist on the warrior, so I think the warrior was almost like the final boss!
Q: Do you not use Munchkin water or cider water?
A: Because my life is not a munchkin… It’s difficult because I don’t enjoy Munchkin water.
My novels will always be a repetition of appropriate crises and overcoming them.
Of course, from the next game, there are plans to place a lot of weak enemies in the beginning for commercial purposes and barriers to entry.
But the Munchkins… Almost nothing except for one work in mind!
Thank you from the bottom of my heart to everyone who has loved Hypnosis Saint until now!
See you in the next work!