Chapter 181 – Concluding Review

Hello! It’s black and white.

If it’s long, if it’s long, if it’s short, it’s short, Mrs. Bing has finally come to an end.

I don’t know if anyone knows, but… Originally, this novel called Yeo Sa-bing was inspired by a novel that was serialized in the neighborhood next door.

In the middle of suffering all kinds of pain while staying in the top 60 after participating in a contest next door. I couldn’t stand the ambiguous grades and finally gave up halfway. If I had to hold on with my teeth forcibly, I might have gone to pay.

In fact, a more primitive impulse dominated my brain. First of all, to explain the concept of the novel that became a rough motif⋯ Some settings were similar.

It was a story in which the main character, Kim Moo-gong, possesses the game character of Kim Mu-gong, who has a ‘muteol-dak concept’ in the game.

The martial art he chose by mistake after being possessed like that was the Cheonma Shin Gong (Unicorn), or something like that.

So, in the case of a novel next door.

[Cheonma Godong]
Rating : ?
Cheon Woo-jin, the 12th head of the Heavenly Demonic Church, is based on the Heavenly Demonic Spirit, which is passed down from generation to generation only to the founder of the Heavenly Demonic Church.
Legend has it that he came up with an enlightenment after hearing rumors about a “Winged horse” That only covets pure women.

In this way, the characteristics were also openly written as ‘Cheonma Singong’ based. Conversely, there was no effect such as ‘distinguishing virginity’ or ‘elevation of state when yin and yang are united with a virgin’. Neighbors are all ages.

In the first place, the reason why such a function as identifying a virgin was created is because the main character who learned the hybrid new skill of a Pegasus and a unicorn was used…

No matter how you think about it, wouldn’t this be 19 gold? 19 Should I use gold? It’s interesting to judge a virgin by martial arts, isn’t it? If it’s a virgin, isn’t it 19 gold of course? I can’t leave the thought, so let’s just say it while the Nopia 19 contest is held! I gave up on participating in the contest next door.

Due to the tight schedule, I started with live serialization right away without any stockpiling.

The setting has also changed except for ‘Kim Moo-gong who learned the new unicorn’ and a few things. The novel next door was a demon where martial arts, psychic powers, and magic all ran amok, but when I actually wrote it, it was incredibly difficult to balance the power. Gravity psychic + kingsword type, teleportation while striking with a baton, an open air battleship that rolls with magic nuclear fusion, something like this. It wasn’t easy to create skills either. So I just limited it to non-aircraft.

Live serialization without hoarding.
Impulsive start.
Setup, Plot Ready 0.

From here, the gates of hell are already open, but I found the most serious problem while writing.

‘I’ve hardly ever read a 19-gold novel.’

19 The only novels I read were Desire by Mok-Ma and the early part of Memorize by Ro Yu-Jin.

So, I ran into a topic I had never seen or used on the 19th with 100% impulsiveness. It was literally crazy. I still wonder what kind of confidence it was.

Aren’t all novels similar?

No, it’s not like that at all lol
I respect writers who write 19 gold. I didn’t know it was this difficult.

First of all, it was a problem from setting the direction of the novel. Everything was done in real time, not pre-planned and written.

Are you just messing with everything as the main character with an out of conscience?
Or are you limited to some extent?

I thought about the former, but I had never read a novel like the former, so I didn’t get a feel for it at all. I ended up going with the latter.

Of course, there were some parts that were set up from the beginning.

‘The final boss is the Demon King.’

This was solid.

The problem is that every day of the journey to the Demon King was an unknown world even for me.

If you write one side today, leave tomorrow’s contents to tomorrow’s me.

That process was repeated over and over again. It was a perilous process that would not be strange no matter when it was broken. In the meantime.

In episode 150, the turning point episode, I too will face a “Turning point”.

I’m also a writer, so I had a rough development framework leading to human-〉 monster-〉 demon king.
The turning point epi was right around the timing of transitioning to human-〉 monster.

I had two directions in mind. If you look at martial arts (more precisely, Buddhist), you can see it like this.

The first is jeom-o (漸悟). It’s step by step, step by step. Even the process of catching monsters is drawn in detail.
The second is Don Oh. It is to awaken the main character in one shot and go straight to the end.

However, no matter how much I thought about it, I didn’t have the confidence to use the gradual progress for fun. A monster just appeared! Defeat stronger monsters! Hyungyeong! Life or death! It seemed that the repeating pattern would continue. Even from the point of view of decisively writing, I was not interested at all, so I ended up going to the extreme latter.

In fact, it cannot be said that sexual problems were not involved. I said this novel even when I went to plus, but my grades were already below the standard. I just wrote because I wanted to write.

But one thing that was unexpected was that my grades went up as I was serializing. So it was a bit strange. If you can’t hit the next town in the beginning, 99% of it will be destroyed, with some exceptions.

Whatever.

To me, it seems like a pretty neat ending. Readers may feel that it’s a quick finish, but… What I can say for sure is that I didn’t think about it roughly and finished it roughly.

In fact, if you look at martial arts in the past, it was surprisingly common to suddenly wake up and jump over the stage. Personally, I think it’s because of the sexual problem (which I couldn’t avoid at the time…), And the enlightenment itself has a very strong Buddhist color. I don’t know what’s accurate.

I like martial arts very much, even though I used something like Unicorn Shin Gong.

My favorite novel is ‘Cheonjambiryongpo’ by Han Baek-rim.

I even joined the Hanbaek Murimseo fan cafe to see the end of that.

Do you see (⋯)

I looked it up and the fancafe membership was in 2013. Because the completion of Cheonjambiryongpo was in 2021⋯ I waited a lot. Unlike the reigning world that gave up completely, author Han Baek-lim kept giving me room haha

I guess I’ll be posting again soon! Then I waited until 20 years. It wasn’t easy.

I heard that next year, they will give you an invincible blood test.

So, there were some parts that were influenced by Cheonjambiryongpo.

Neungwol void, which the main character finally awakened, was inspired by the void leap used by Danunryong, the main character of Cheonjambiryongpo. Of course, the concept of ‘void’ is different from Cheonjambiryongpo.

And I have a wish to write a teacher character like Hyeopjae So Yeonshin someday… I don’t know if it’s possible before I die. I still remember.

[Lee Hyeopje Soyeonsin risked her life to save her disciple.]
[Flee with all your might. Even so, it will be difficult to survive.]

As soon as I saw this, it really wasn’t a waste to wait nearly 10 years.

Anyway.

From the background to the present day, setting and clichés, even if twisted and twisted, I wanted to create a world where nothingness and cooperation exist in the end. That’s why it’s written mainly for knights who sacrifice their lives to protect people rather than the wicked. It may feel unrealistic, but I wanted to do it even if it meant giving up a little bit of probability or veracity.

That was the reason why ‘Magicism’ didn’t match its name and rather resembled the Apostle of Justice. Of course, historically, it was ambiguous to see the religions designated as ‘Magicism’ as mere evil.

It is also the main character’s power in the first place.

I think that in martial arts, whether it is evil or good, the Demonic Cult must have its own ‘style’. The coolness of the Cheonma Shinkyo that I think in this novel is ‘pride’.

Not too long ago, I heard that the anime Bleach Thousand Years of Blood came out, so I looked around and saw Manshin Kubo’s famous quotes and ‘thumped’ her knee.

[When it rusts, if you can’t put it back up again, and if you can’t hold it properly, it will tear your body apart.
Yes.
Pride is like a blade.]

I saw it after I had finished writing about the Cheonma Shinkyo, but as soon as I saw it, my middle school 2nd sensibility, which does not disappear even with age, literally exploded.

‘Pride that does not rust’ This was the Cheonma Shinkyo I wanted to express. I don’t know if it turned out right.

Let’s talk a little bit about heroin…

My history of reading genre fiction is divided into two parts.

1. Hard times for heroines

Really… I don’t know why the old novels were so impatient to bother the heroine. If it’s a gang rape, he’s a nobleman, and he even kills it with the main character’s awakening material. Actually, I hated it terribly at the time (personal taste). In the worst case, there were many cases where the two fused. Liver or not. I got angry and threw the book away.

2. Hijeonjuk or Trophy Heroine

The next trend was in the era of high-definition bamboo, when works in which the heroine’s role was at an air level were crowded. If you look at the big frame, you can see that it continues until now. Of course, before genre novels, I’ve seen quite a few light novels that put a lot of emphasis on heroines. Werewolves, Full Metal Panic, I don’t even remember. It’s been too long.

As a result, it was quite difficult to give weight to the heroine even though it was an academy. Basically, I’m very familiar with the main character’s monopoly system.

It’s ironic that the work I like the most is Cheonjambiryongpo, which is close to a group play.

There is a reason why the story is structured in a system where the main character almost monopolizes from a certain moment.

If you look at live serials, you end up writing mostly familiar things. Besides, since I don’t like playing the heroine harshly, it was difficult to give her a crisis. Except for the unavoidable crisis for the ‘Harem’ (+ the inevitable protagonist’s nuclear personality⋯). I don’t like the so-called ‘sale’ either. That’s why Chung Ha-na and Ye-rin Seomun were transferred through a somewhat forced process. The potential for other women to be heroines is also open. I just didn’t write everything in the article. Because I don’t know the future. For example, Ryu Eun-chae, who was the only one who was not incorporated into the harem, and started hysteria. Like the other subordinates of the Red Dragon Corps who snatched the bouquet at the end.

As a reaction against the heroine in a harsh era, treating the heroine like a flower has a side effect of becoming an ornamental flower…

If you want to increase the proportion of heroines in other ways, you can use more so-called ‘tiki-taka’. Did you say that a writer is a reader because he is before a writer?

As I said above, I’m very familiar with the ‘porridge’ meta. If the heroine eats too much, can I do this myself? Am I right? I have a disease to do. I’m sure it wasn’t this bad until I experienced it next door.

The symptoms intensified because I was harshly attacked by the spicy taste comments.

‘There is no content for today’s episode.’
‘A one-line summary would be possible.’
‘The development is too slow. I’m getting off.’
‘So, when will the main character come out?’
‘I hate copying the amount by changing the point of view.’
‘I don’t know about the free version, but it doesn’t seem like a novel worth following even the paid ones.’

I don’t think I’ve ever received a lot of ‘comments of this kind’, but there are quite a few posts from comrades (?) Who climbed Tube together… I don’t think it’s some kind of trauma.

In fact, the problem was that this was also a ‘live serial without preparation’.

If I had time to spare, I would have adjusted the pace a bit, but this is true. I was in a hurry to write a day right away. Somehow, I didn’t want to take a break or do it all year round.

So I think there are probably a lot of people who are a bit dissatisfied with the amount of heroin. Considering that this is a small Nobel Pia, I tried my best, but it is like this. It’s because I’m not good enough. In particular, the 19-karat gold part is ‘Actually, I hardly ever read a 19-karat gold novel! I have never used it at all!” Thanks to the AI, I was able to turn my gaze around and live a little.

It’s an excuse to say that it’s all over.

Let’s talk a little bit about your next project.

It seems that the next work will be a martial arts that is a midfielder from the background. I am now studying Chinese characters. It’s the first time I’ve been studying Chinese characters since middle school, so I think I’ll have a rat in my head… Personally, I have always wanted to try martial arts.

I like the unique feeling of martial arts that is difficult to express in other genres. Whether it’s the delay of the teachers who are more sticky than their parents. I don’t know when the series will start. It could fall over again… Martial arts is so difficult, so I’m careful.

Anyway, this is how my third novel came to an end. Even if I don’t reply to each comment, I’m reading all of them, and some people have followed me since the first work. The first novel was the first novel I ever wrote, so the material was a bit minor and lacking, and even the next one was from the next town. I am truly grateful. That’s why I want to be a writer.

It was last September when I started writing Suinaka, my first novel in my life. I’ve been working as a writer for over a year now. This is the third novel I have completed, and indeed, when I write this final review, I feel strangely excited, relieved, and blissful.

This little one is especially so. 19. Is it because you took on a challenge that you have never done before?

Thanks, the words are too long. The review is longer than the text. I will have to repent.

So, I’ll cut it short by posting words of gratitude to the readers who have been with ‘Yeosabing’ so far.

I hope to see you in your next work. I love you!

Compensation for black flowers.